오픽 선택 필수 질문 31 쇼핑하다 겪은 문제

Have you ever experienced a problem while shopping? How did you handle it? Explain What happend in detail

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I think about the problem about shopping
that was not my fault, there was problem about calculation
I went to the department store to buy a coat
it was cashmere so it was light and design was so good
I paid some money and the stuff did wrong calculation
I didn't know it was wrong first
but few minute later  the staff called me when I was going to the home
so I knew I paid wrong especially I overpaid 10 times
so I did refund that accurate price
I got free socks for sorry means
It was cute happening
since then I double check my calculation
 
 

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Let me tell you about a problem I had while shopping.
It wasn't my fault; it was a calculation error.
Last month, I went to a department store to buy a new coat.
It was made of cashmere, so it was light, and the design was really nice.
I made the payment, but the staff member accidentally added an extra zero to the price.
At first, I didn't realize the mistake.
But a few minutes later, while I was on my way home, the store called me.
They informed me that I had been overcharged by ten times the actual price!
So I went back to the store, got a full refund, and then paid the correct amount.
As an apology for the mistake, the staff even gave me a pair of socks for free! It was a cute little incident.
Since then, I always double-check my receipt after making a purchase.

 표현 줍줍
make the payment : 결제하다.
amount : 금액