오픽 선택 필수 질문 39 음악 감상 도중 겪은 인상적인 경험

tell me about the most memorable experience you had while listening to music when was is? where did it happen? what made the experience so memorable? please describe it in as much detail as possibel

내 한글 문장

음악이 나를 기분 좋게 만든 경험에 대해 이야기하고 싶어요
2년 전 겨울에 제 미래에 대한 불안 때문에 우울할 때가 있었어요
그 때 Sia 의 Snowman을 들었는데
감정에 도움이 되었어요
기분전환이 되었습니다.
신기한 경험이었어요
한 100번 동안 이 한 곡만 계속해서 들었던 것 같아요
음악은 감정을 좋게 바꾸고 공감할 수 있는 큰 힘이 있는 것 같아요

내 영어 문장

I want to talk about the experience that music made me feel good
I was anxious about my future
so i was really depressed
That day I listened to the Sia's Snowman
It really helped my emotions
I could change my mood
it was so interesting experience to me
so I think I listened to that music almost 100times
I know that music have super power that change and help emotions


AI 수정

I'd like to share a memorable experience where music really helped me through a tough time.
About two years ago, in the winter, I was going through a really rough patch.
I was feeling very anxious about my future and quite depressed.
During that period, I discovered Sia's song, 'Snowman'.
Listening to it genuinely helped me process my emotions,
and I could feel my mood slowly changing for the better.
It was such a powerful and comforting experience for me.
I think I must have listened to that one song almost a hundred times.
I truly believe that music has an incredible power to change our emotions and offer comfort

 표현 줍줍
go through : 겪다
patch :
anxious : 걱정