오픽 선택 필수 질문 45 요리 도중 겪은 인상적인 경험

Tell me about an interesting or memorable experience you had while cooking What did you cook? What made the experience so memorable? Please describe it in detail

내 한글 문장

요리하다가 있었던 경험을 말씀드릴게요.
몇 달 전, 많은 사람들이 넷플릭스에서 Culinary Class Wars라는 요리 생존 프로그램을 보고 있었어요. 이 프로그램이 정말 인기 많았거든요. 그래서 많은 사람이 요리에 더 관심을 갖고 유명한 셰프가 되고 싶어 했습니다. 그래서 친구 집에서 요리 대결을 했어요. 저는 오일 파스타를 만들려고 했는데, 음식을 접시에 담다가 실수로 접시를 떨어뜨렸어요. 정말 속상했고 분위기를 망친 것 같았어요. 너무 미안했고, 어쩔 수 없이 새 접시를 사야 했습니다. 그날 이후로는 요리할 때 음식과 접시를 꼭 조심해서 확인합니다.


내 영어 문장
Okay let me tell you about my experience during cooking
few months ago many people watched Culinary Class Wars in Netflix
it was really famous cooking survive program
so a lot of people were more into cooking wanted to be like famous chef
so I also did it
and me and my friend did cooking battle in my friend's house
I tried to make oil pasta but you know
while I plated my food in the dish
I mistakely droke the dish yeah
I was really Debbie Downer, I mean I was party pooper
I was so sorry about that
and I had no choise but to get a new one for him
from that day on I make sure to check my food and dish while I cook.


AI 수정
Let me tell you about an experience I had while cooking.
A few months ago, many people were watching Culinary Class Wars on Netflix.
It’s a really popular cooking survival show.
Because of that, a lot of people became more interested in cooking and wanted to be famous chefs.
So, my friend and I had a cooking battle at his house.
I tried to make oil pasta, but while I was plating my pasta, I accidentally dropped the dish.
I felt really disappointed — I was a real party pooper.
I was very sorry about that, and I had no choice but to buy a new dish for him.
Since that day, I always make sure to check my food and dishes carefully when I cook.

 표현 줍줍
while cooking : 요리하는 동안
while I was plating my pasta : 파스타를 플레이팅 하는 동안
I felt disappointed : 실망스러웠어요
Party pooper : 분위기 깨는 사람