오픽 선택 필수 질문 49 다니는 헬스장 묘사하기

You indicated in the survey that you go to a fitness club
Where is it located?
What does it look like?
Please describe it in as much detail as possible

내 한글 문장

제가 다니는 헬스장 말씀해 드릴게요!
저는 여러 군데 헬스장을 다녔었는데
지금은 집 가까운 데서 다니고 있어요
제가 다니는 헬스장은 넓고 깔끔하고 다양한 기구들이 많아요
대표님이 새로운 기구를 또 산다고 해서 기대 중입니다.
모든 직원분들이 인사도 잘해주시고 친절해요
또한 샤워실도 커서 씻고 다니기 좋아요
가장 좋은 점은 무료 얼음물을 제공해요
이게 진짜 중요한데 여름에 얼음물을 마시면서 웨이트 트레이닝을 하면 너무 좋습니다!


내 영어 문장

Okay let me tell you my gym
I've used to go to a lot of gym
but 3 years ago I set gym that I use now
it is close to my house
and it is so huge and  there are many machine
I am so excited bacuse the Gym CEO told me he bouaght new machine
every people are so kind
and it also has big shower room it's nice
the best thing is that I can get some ice for free when I work out
it's suprisingly inportant to me
becuase It's super knowhow to build my muscle

AI 수정
Let me tell you about the gym I go to these days
I've tried several gyms in the past, but now I go to one that's close to my house.
The gym is really spacious, clean, and has a wide variety of equipment
the owner told me that he's planning to buy some new machines soon, so I'm really looking forward to it
All the staff members are friendly and always greet me with a smile
the shower room is also large and well-maintained, so it's comfortable to use
but the best part is that they provide free ice water.
It might sound small, but it's actually really important-drinking cold water while working out, especially in the summer, feels amazing and keeps me energized.



 표현 줍줍
spacious : 널찍한
equipment : 장비
The owner : 사장님
staff members : 직원들
greet me with a smile : 웃으면서 인사하다
feels amazing and keeps me energized : 기분이 좋고 활력을 불어넣어 줍니다.