OPIC 선택 필수 질문 02 좋아하는 방

 

Please tell me about What‘s your favorite rooms? what does it look like? why do you love that room?

내 한글 문장

제가 가장 좋아하는 방을 소개해드릴게요!
그 이유는 홈짐이 있습니다.
제 가장 큰 취미는 웨이트 운동이고
저는 두 형제 중에 형이라 동생보다 큰 방을 쓸 수 있었어요.
코로나 시대에 헬스장을 갈 수 없어 헬스 기구를 하나씩 모으다 보니 제 방은 거의 홈짐입니다.
인클라인 벤치부터 덤벨도 3kg부터 20kg까지 있어요
턱걸이, 요가매트, 25kg짜리 이지바벨도 있습니다.
심지어 마샬 스피커도 있어서 신나는 노래 틀면 헬스장 분위기를 낼 수 있어요.
요즘도 일이 늦게 끝나서 헬스장에 못 가면 짧더라도 홈짐을 이용합니다. 완벽하진 않지만 최고라고 생각해요



내 영어 문장

What I really love about room my home is definitely my room!
that’s because my room is almost like a home gym I have younger brother and I’m first son in my family so I could use bigger room than my younger brother.
In covid I couldn't go to the gym
so I bought portion of something that I can use for my workout.
now my room is almost home gym
I have Pull up machine, Dumbbell set, incline bench, meditation mat, 25 kilo Ezybarbbell
even I have marchar speaker that is expensive speaker bland
so I can make the gym mood when I listen to music use my speaker.
these days I use my home gym if I finish work late it’s not perfect but I think it is great.



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I was able to use, I got to use
During the COVID 19
Some work out gear
now my room is almost home gym
rageing from 3kg to 20kg.
even a 25 kilo E-Z bar
Marshall speaker
speaker  bland
I can really create a lively gym atmosphere
It's not perfext but I think it's great.

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My favorite room in my home is definitely my own room. that’s because my room is almost like a home gym
My biggest hobby is weight training.
I'm older bother so I was able to use a bigger room
During the COVID 19  I couldn't go to the gym
so I started buying various pieces of equipment I could use for my workouts in the room.
now My room is almost like a home gym
Specifically, I have a pull-up machine, an incline bench, a full set of dumbbells ranging from 3kg to 20kg, a yoga mat, and even a 25-kilo E-Z bar. even I have a Marshall speaker that is expensive speaker brand. so I can really create a lively gym atmosphere when I play some upbeat music through it.
these days I use my home gym if I finish work late. it’s not perfect but I think it is great.

단어
biggest Hobby
various pieces of equipment 다양한 장비
atmosphere : 분위기