OPIC 선택 필수 질문 03 과거현재 집 비교

 

Compare the home you live in before to the one you live in now. what are the differences between these two homes? provide as many detail as possible

내 한글 문장

제가 살면서 이사를 딱 한 번 했는데
예전 집과 현재 집은 많은 것이 바뀌었어요!
일단 집 사이즈, 방 개수, 창고 등
그런데 가장 큰 차이는 화장실 개수입니다.
화장실이 1개에서 2개로 늘었어요,
예전 집에서 살 때는 화장실 때문에 트러블이 있었어요.
지금은 화장실 때문에 문제가 생긴 적이 거의 없습니다.
앞으로 제가 결혼을 하게 되면 어떤 집으로 이사 갈지 모르지만 화장실은 꼭 2개였으면 좋겠어요.



내 영어 문장

I moved to my home just once
It has changed a lot.
rooms, home size, a utility room
but the biggest change is the bathroom
because I have two bathroom right now.
when I was little kid I had troubles with my family because of a bathroom
but now I almost don’t have trouble
later if I will get marry and go out to the home
I hope I have a house which has two bathroom.


AI 수정

I’ve only moved once in my entire life, which was to my current apartment.
The differences between my old home and my current one are quite significant.
For instance, there are differences in the overall size of the house, the number of rooms, and even whether there’s a utility rooms or not
However, the most significant change, by far, is the number of bathrooms. My old place only had one, but now I have two bathrooms.
When I was younger, living in the old house, we often had little conflicts or inconveniences because of having only one bathrooms for everyone.
but now we hardly ever have issues
In the future, If I will get married and move into my own place
I really hope to find a home with at least two bathrooms.