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what kinds of concerts or performances do you enjoy? why do you like these types of performances? please explain in detail?

내 한글 문장

네 콘서트에 대해서 말할게요
가장 기억에 남는 콘서트는 PSY concert입니다.
PSY는 글로벌스타입니다. 많은 명곡들이 있습니다.
대표곡으로 강남스타일이 있어요.
흠뻑쇼를 아십니까?
우리나라에서 진짜 유명한 콘서트입니다.
여름에 하는 건데 전국 투어를 합니다!
드레스 코드는 파란색입니다.
콘서트 도중에 엄청난 양의 물을 뿌립니다.
몸이 다 젖는 것은 기본입니다.
흠뻑쇼 가장 큰 특징은 앙코르곡입니다.
메인 공연을 제외하고 앙코르 공연을 거의 2시간 넘게 합니다 또한 매 콘서트마다 다른 게스트 공연이 준비되어 있어서 누가 게스트로 올지 기대를 합니다.
기회가 되면 여자친구랑 가려고 합니다.
정말 추천합니다.

내 영어 문장

okay let me tell you about the concert.
I want to talk about Psy concert
PSY is gromal star he has a lot of legend music
Gangnam style is his representative song
Do you know 흠뻑쇼
it's one of the famous concert in my country
the dress code is blue
the concert open every region during the summer
and it spread a mount of water when he song
it's soak every clothes
the best thing is that ancol performances are so long
it was almost 2 hours
also every concert invite different quest singer who is unexpected
if I have a chance I'm planning to go next summer with my girlfriend
I'm fully recommended


 

AI 수정

Sure, let me tell you about a really memorable concert:
PSY's 'Summer Swag' show.
PSY is a global star with many legendary songs.
'Gangnam Style' is, of course, his most famous one.
Have you heard of 'Summer Swag' (흠뻑쇼)? It's one of the most famous concerts in Korea.
The dress code is always blue, and it goes on a nationwide tour every summer.
The highlight is that he sprays a huge amount of water during his performance –
everyone gets completely soaked!
But the best part is the encore! Besides the main show, the encore performances alone can last for almost two hours.
Also, each concert has different guest singers, and you never know who will show up, which makes it even more exciting.
If I get a chance, I'm definitely planning to go next summer with my girlfriend.
I highly recommend it to everyone!

 표현 줍줍

Have you heard of 'Summer Swag?
: 흠뻑쇼 들어본 적 있나요?
it goes on a nationwide tour every summer.
: 매년 전국투어를 합니다.
spray : 뿌리다
everyone gets completely soaked!
:모두가 다 젖어요
besides : ~을 제외하고