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How did you first become interested in attending concerts? When did you start what spraked your interest in them? Please explain as much detail as possible

내 한글 문장

알겠어요 처음 인상 깊었던 공연을 말할게요!
너무 오래전이라 기억이 자세히 나진 않아요
확실한 건 대학교 축제였던 것 같습니다.
대학교 축제에서 다이나믹 듀오가 공연을 했어요.
다이나믹 듀오는 레전드 힙합 듀오입니다.
한국에서 매우 유명해요.
그들을 학교 무대에서 처음 봤어요.
학교 무대가 엄청 컸는데
두 명이서 무대를 꽉 채운 느낌이 들었습니다.
많은 에너지를 느꼈어요.
공연을 거의 한 시간 동안 했는데 한 시간 내내 뛰면서 노래를 했어요.
그 뒤로 공연과 콘서트를 자주 보러 다니는 것 같아요!
도파민 하고 스트레스를 완전히 풀어주거든요.

내 영어 문장

Okay I will tell you about my first interesting concert.
it's been long time so I don't remember exactly
but I think cently it was university festival
I was 1st class
dynamic dueo came to my festival
there's no doubt that they are regand hiphop combi
they are super famous in my country
it was my first experience to see them
the stage was so huge
but they were stacking all stage
it was really amount energy that I felt.
the performance was almoust during 1 hours
they were not rest evey time
it was super amazing
It think after that concer I go to the concert and performance frequently
It help me to relieve my stress and get a lot dopamin rush

 
AI 수정

Sure, let me tell you about how I first became interested in concerts.
It was a long time ago, so I don't remember all the details exactly, but I believe it was at a university festival.
I was just a first-year student at university then.
The legendary hip-hop duo, Dynamic Duo, performed at my university festival.
They are without a doubt one of the most famous hip-hop duos in Korea.
It was my first time seeing them perform live.
The stage was huge, but they completely filled it with their amazing energy.
I felt such an incredible amount of energy from them!
The performance lasted for almost an hour, and they didn't stop performing for a single moment!
It was super amazing!
I think after that concert, I started going to concerts and performances much more often. They really help me relieve stress and give me a great dopamine rush!

 표현 줍줍

I don't remember all the details exactly : 전부다 기억나진 않지만
first-year student : 1학년
legendary : 전설
It was my first time seeing them perform live. : 라이브 공연은 처음이었어요.
I felt such an incredible amount of energy from them :
그들에게 많은 에너지를 느꼈어요.
The performance lasted for almost an hour
: 그 공연은 거의 한 시간 동안 지속했어요.
I started going to concerts and performances much more
: 콘서트와 공연을 더 많이 가기 시작했어요.