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Tell me about the most memorable or impressive concert you have attended when was it, and whose concert was it? what made the concert so special? please describe it in detail

내 한글 문장

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바로 애프터스쿨 콘서트예요.
거의 20년 전, 저 초등학생
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가족들과 보러 갔습니다.
애프터스쿨이 지금은 인기가 없지만, 예전에는 최고의 인기를 누렸어요.
사람이 엄청 많았고. 저는 운 좋게 맨 앞자리에서 공연을 봤어요
앞쪽에서 봐서 그런지 너무 이쁘고 대단했어요.
애프터스쿨 멤버 중 리즈라는 가수가
저와 하이파이브를 했습니다.
정말 엄청 놀랐어요
장난으로 말하길 손을 안 씻는다고 했습니다.
그때를 생각하니 예전이 그립네요.

내 영어 문장

memorable concerts?
I already said that my most memorable concert is PSY concert
but I’ll will tell another concert
I just think about thing a long time ago
it was after school concert
almost 20 years ago when I was elementary student
the concert was in Ansan lake park near my house
I went there with my family
After school isn’t famous anymore right now
but that days they were one of the most famous Idol in my country
anyway the concert was crowded many people
I took the first sit in front of the stage luckly
so during the performance I could do high five Lease from after school
It was really stunned
I was like I’ll never wash my hand” yeah it was funny
I miss that time when I thought  

 
AI 수정

well, I already mentioned PSY’s concert, but there’s another memorable one I’d like to tell you about.
It just came to my mind from a very long time ago.
It was an After School concert.
This was almost 20 years ago, Back when I was in elementary school.
The concert was held at Ansan Lake park, very close to my house.
I went there with my family.
After School isn’t very famous anymore these days, but back then,
they were one of the top idol group in Korea.
The concert was packed with so many people.
Luckily, I got to sit in the first row right in front of the stage!
During the performance, one of the After School members, Lizzy
Actually high-fived me!
I was completely stunned!
I even jokingly said
I’ll never wash this hand again
yeah it was really funny.
Thinking about it now,
I really miss those old days.

 표현 줍줍

It just came to my mind : 갑자기 떠올랐어요
The concert was held at Ansan Lake park
콘서트는 안산 호수 공원에서 열렸습니다.
The concert was packed with so many people
: 그 콘서트는 사람들로 가득 찼어요.