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in your background survey, you indecated that you enjoy going to concerts tell me about the concert venue yoi visit most often
where is located? what does it look like? pleas describe it in as much detail as possible

내 한글 문장

이 질문은 쉽게 말할 수 있어요.
자주 방문하는 콘서트장은 와스타디움입니다.
와스타디움은 원래 안산에서 가장 큰 축구경기장입니다.
저희 집에서 차 타고 20분 거리에 있어요.
매우 가깝습니다.
가장 좋은 점은 주차장이 큽니다!
콘서트 하는 날에는 차를 가져가진 않아요 너무 막혀요
고무 트랙과 인조 잔디로 되어 있는데
콘서트를 할 때면 무대를 세팅해서 진행합니다.
최근에 슈퍼콘서트를 했다고 들었어요
저는 이번엔 가진 못했지만 다음에 꼭 가보고 싶어요.

내 영어 문장

I can tell this topic so easliy
the concert place which I often go is Wa stadium
it is originally most huge soccer play ground in Ansan
it takes 20 minute form my home by car
yeah it's so close
the great thing is that it has a huge parking lot
but you know I usually go there to enjoy the concert
I don't take my car
it was too stuck in there
and it made of artificail turf and rubberized track
when they have concert they set up the stage
recently I heard the super concert in wa stadium
I didn't enjoy it but if I have a change I wanna go there as soon as possible


 

AI 수정

oh this is an easy topic for me!
The concert venue I go to most often is Wa stadium. It’s actually the biggest soccer stadium in Ansan. It takes about 20 minutes to get there from my home by car, so it’s very close!
One good thing about Wa stadium is that it has a huge parking lot.
however, when I go there for a concert, I don’t usually take my car.
the traffic gets really bad on concert day!
the stadium has artificial turf and a rubber running track.
For concerts, they always set up a special stage in the middle
Recently, I heard they held a big super concert there.
I couldn’t go this time, but if I get another chance, I definitely want to go!

 표현 줍줍

venue : 장소
It takes about 20 minutes to get there from my home by car
집에서 차 타고 그곳에 가면 약 20분 정도 걸려요.
traffic gets really bad : 교통이 안 좋다
artificial turf : 인조 잔디
if I get another chance, I definitely want to go!
기회가 되면 가고 싶다.