오픽 선택 필수 질문 51 운동을 시작하게 된 계기

Explain why you started exercising
what was your first workout like?
Has your workout routine changed over time?

내 한글 문장

원래 운동을 좋아했어요 축구 같은 스포츠요
본격적으로 헬스를 시작한 건 군대에 있을 때에요
턱걸이를 하면서 근육 만드는 것에 재미를 가지기 시작했어요
전역 후 제 취미가 되었어요
이제는 2일에 하루는 꼭 운동을 해야 하는 사람이 되었습니다
헬스를 시작하면서 자신감도 많이 생기고
스트레스 관리도 잘 됩니다.
친구도 많이 생긴 것 같아요!
내년 목표는 다이어트르 열심히 해서
보디빌딩 대회를 나가는 겁니다.

내 영어 문장

I originally love to sports like soccer, basketball
I started weight training when I was in army
I enjoyed making my muscle when I did pull up
so after army weight training became my biggest hobby
right now I'm sports man who have to exercise one day in two day
I've had a lot of confidence about my life
and I can control my stress well
I got many friend
so My next goal is hard diet and go to the bodybuilding contest

AI 수정

I’ve always enjoyed playing sports like soccer and basketball.
I started weight training seriously when I was in the military.
At first, I did pull-ups, and that’s when I began to enjoy building muscle.
After I was discharged, working out became one of my biggest hobbies.
These days, I feel like I have to work out at least once every two days.
Since I started exercising, I’ve gained a lot of confidence
and I’m much better at managing stress.
I’ve also made many new friends through working out.
My goal for next year is to go on a strict diet
and compete in a bodybuilding competition.

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 표현 줍줍
discharge : 제대하다
at least once every two days : 적어도 2일에 하루
Strict diet : 엄격한 다이어트