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How did you interested in visiting parks? when and where did you go?
who did you go with?
how has your interested in park changed over time? please explain in detail

내 한글 문장

음 공원에 관심이 가졌던 기억이 너무 오래전이라
생각을 좀 해볼게요 잠시만 기다려주세요
언제인지 정확히 기억나진 않지만 어렸을 때
놀이터를 가고 싶어서 공원에 갔었던 것 같아요
안산 호수 공원 놀이터가 집 앞 공원보다 크고
다양한 것들이 많았어요 미끄럼틀, 정글짐 같은 거요
아버지에게 같이 가달라고 때를 쓰곤 했어요
요즘은 안산 호수공원에 달리기를 하러 많이 가는 것 같아요 앞에서도 말했지만 고무로 된 러닝 트랙이 진짜 끝내줍니다.
결국 제 공원에 대한 관심은 놀이터에서 달리기로 바뀐 것 같네요.



내 영어 문장

Umm I was interested in the parks first time,
it's been a long time ago
so I have to think just moment
I don't remember exactly detail but when I was little kid I wanted to go park to go to the playground
Ansan lake park's playground was bigger than
playground which is in front of my old home.
and there were a los of thing like a long slider, a jungle gym
I used to ask to my father to hang out together
but nowadays I usually go to the park to run
As I said that Ansan lake park has special rubberized running track
to sum up my interested in park has changed playground to running track over time



 
AI 수정

Hmm, I need a moment to think about when I first became interested in parks.
It was a very long time ago.
I don't remember the exact details, but when I was a little kid, I wanted to go to parks mainly to use the playgrounds.
The playground at Ansan Lake Park, for example, was much bigger than the one near my old home.
It had a lot more cool things, like a long slide and a jungle gym.
I used to beg my father to take me there!
But nowadays, my interest in parks has changed a lot.
I usually go to parks to run.
As I mentioned earlier, Ansan Lake Park has a fantastic rubberized running track, which is perfect for exercise.
So, to sum it up, my interest in parks has evolved from playgrounds to running tracks over time.




 표현 줍줍

I don't remember the exact details
: 자세히 기억나진 않아요

my interest in parks has changed a lot.
: 제 공원 관심이 많이 변했어요

I used to beg my father to take me there!
: 아빠에게 데려다 달라고 떼를 쓰곤 했어요.