오픽 선택 필수 질문 21 아이와 어른의 공원 활동 비교

Compare the activitied that children and adults do at parks
What are the differences between them? How do park facilities differ for children and adults?

내 한글 문장

아이와 어른의 활동을 비교해 볼게요
아이들은 보통 놀이터에 가는 것 같아요
요즘 공원들이 고급진 놀이터를 설치하고 있어요.
집라인부터 트램펄린까지 아주 다양해요.
어른들은 보통 자연을 즐기려고 하는 것 같아요
경치 사진을 찍고 자연을 즐겨요
아이와 어른들이 같이 하는 활동은 피크닉인 것 같아요
봄이나 가을에 가족들이 피크닉을 하러 공원에 많이 갑니다.




내 영어 문장

okay I will compare kids and adults activities in the parks
I think kids want to hang out friends in the playing
so I think that why kids go to the parks
these days parks install fancy playground for kids
Like a gym line, trampling
I just tried it before it was super awesome.
and I think
Adults want to go to the parks for enjoying natural
they see the good natural things
like flowers, trees that you can think of
they enjoy taking pictures with them
lastly kids and adult enjoy picnic
so I can see a lot of family who take picnic in the parks on spring and fall



 
AI 수정

Alright, Let’s compare what kids and adults usually do at parks.
kid mainly go to parks to play with their friends at the playground.
Many parks these days have installed upgraded playgrounds for kids.
they have all sorts of cool things, like zip lines and trampolines.
I even tried a zip line once, and it was super awesome!
As for adults, I think they mostly go to parks to enjoy nature. they like to see beautiful natural things like flowers and trees, and many of them enjoy taking pictures of them.
Lastly, one activity that both kid and adults enjoy together is picnic.
so, especially in spring and fall, you can see many families having picnics at the parks.



 표현 줍줍
mainly : 주로
Zip line :  집라인
Trampolines : 트램펄린