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You indicated in your background survey that you like going to the beach Tell me about your favorite beach Where is it, and what does it look like? Why do you like it so much?

내 한글 문장

우리나라는 반도라 삼면이 바다예요.
동쪽, 서쪽, 남쪽
그래서 아름다운 해변이 많아요
만약 하나만 골라야 한다면
제가 가장 좋아하는 해변은 무창포 비치입니다.
서쪽 바다 중앙에 위치해 있어요.
유명하지 않은 해변이라 자연상태가 보존되어 있어요.
자연을 즐길 수 있죠
바다생물도 많이 볼 수 있어요
그리고 바다와 산이 어우러져 일몰 때 엄청난 경치를 볼 수 있어요
제가 듣기로는 무창포 해변이 점점 유명해지고 있다고 들었어요
너무 유명해지지 않아서 자연 해변이 유지되었으면 좋겠습니다.






내 영어 문장

My country is a peninsula so there are three size sea
East, west, and south
so there is a lot of beaches 
If I choose most one umm 
my kina of beaches is 무창포 beach
it is located in the middle of west see
It's not famous but It preserve a awesome natural condition
I can enjoy natural and see many sea cretures
and then beach and mountains is great harmony
so I can get a good sceanery at sunset
as far as I heard 무창포 beach is getting famous
I hope It will be stay natural environment





 
AI 수정

My country is a peninsula, so it's surrounded by seas on three sides – east, west, and south. 
This means we have many beautiful beaches.
If I have to choose just one, my favorite beach is Muchangpo Beach. 
It's located on the west coast. It's not as famous as some other beaches, 
but it has preserved its amazing natural beauty.
You can really enjoy nature there and see many sea creatures. 
The beach and mountains there create a beautiful harmony. 
Especially at sunset, you can enjoy a spectacular view. 
As far as I've heard, Muchangpo Beach is slowly getting more famous. 
I really hope it stays a beautiful, natural environment and doesn't get too crowded.

 표현 줍줍
it's surrounded by seas on three sides : 삼면이 바다로 둘러싸여 있어요.
It's not as famous as some other beaches : 다른 해변만큼 유명하지는 않아요.
spectacular view : 장관
As far as I've heard : 제가 들은 바로는